Thanks for correcting the schematic

I think I'm misunderstanding the jack symbols in relation to the schematic and how they actually work. There's also a minor difference in the SK1 and SK2 jack symbols, so perhaps two different types should be used? The documentation only says "jack sockets" in the parts list so I assumed the two sockets I illustrated would work.
I looked up several datasheets including
Neutrik's Jack circuits PDF document which appears to indicate several different switch configurations.
The only types I've had any experience with join/cut a signal whilst also supplying it to the inserted jack's "tip" or "tip" and "sleeve". Should I be looking for a jack socket with some sort of switch which is activated by the insertion/removal of a plug but not connecting to it? The datasheets don't go into this sort of detail
It appears that the SK2 "tip" switch is the switched jack symbol on the right, and the leftmost switch shows the "sleeve" connected/cut to GND. So according to the schematic it appears that I need two SK2 switched mono sockets to make this work.
How (and why) could I use a stereo jack to join this together when there are 4 separate signal sources? Also, with a stereo socket a mono jack plug will be shorting the "sleeve" and "ring" together.
To further complicate things (sorry)

I would like to add, if possible, a female XLR panel connector to the mic input (such as used in the Roland SVC-350 vocoder, below).
Circuitry for converting it into a balanced signal before it enters the mic input (same as the jack connections) would be ideal. Obviously it also needs to be switched (so that an inserted line-jack (rear) will be disconnected or make a mic-input jack plug disconnect. I don't know if there are XLR sockets with built-in switches (to "detect" an inserted XLR plug) -at least I haven't found anything when searching the web yet, but perhaps this could be made by making an opening to the socket and fasten a micro-switch there.
Does this sound doable?
EDIT: found it!!

Yes, Neutrik actually has a switched 3-pin XLR female socket:
NC3FBV2-SW.
EDIT2: this must be my lucky day because I found something equally interesting: a combined jack and XLR socket with switches:
Neutrik NCJ-10FI-H.
